Reviews for My Beautiful Mistake
a monday survivor chapter 21 . 10/6/2005
last one, i promise...

almost end of chapter 21

Ihit mydestinationwith five minutes tospare and I decided to perch outside of the classroom

a monday survivor chapter 19 . 10/6/2005
One more...

Very beginging of chap 19

I must be on the road to becoming a pushover. I withheld a sigh and nodded in agreement. “I’ll stay a while longer but you better hurry up and find your brother or when you leave to get him later I won’t be *her when you return


*slowly die's, or falls asleep or whatever*
a monday survivor chapter 18 . 10/6/2005
Okay, I'm getting tierd, so I'll give you these and be on my way... or hope someone else will fix the typos for you... or whatever... sleepy...

Here are some more typos:

Middle of chapter 15:He had a lean body that made my breath catch, think black hair that *bagged me to run my fingers though it. (Begged)

Almost end of Chapter 15:“I knew there would be company *her when I saw the car outside but imagine my surprise walking in on… that.” (Here)

Very Beginning of Chapter 16:I really don’t ask for much *I can be a little conceited sometimes. (Shouldn’t there be a “but” or something?)

Very Beginning of Chapter 16:He’s got this whole humiliation act *they he’s into(No they)

Almost 1/4 of Chapter 16I was almost positive there was a lot under *he skin that I had no idea about, that she never showed. (Her)
a monday survivor chapter 15 . 10/6/2005
Hey, I love your story! In chapter 15 there is a little type-o. It's at the begining, so here it is:

“Well I just realized we aren’t havingspending nearly enough time togetherthese days.”

Okay... Well... Yeah... Um... I love you story... I'll shut-up now...
jenny chapter 28 . 9/30/2005
i just finished reading your story. ITS GREAT. you have to write a sequel.
KaiaLeigh chapter 28 . 9/13/2005
I think it is fine how it is but a sequel would be cool too. It wont ruin it.
DreamGirl101 chapter 28 . 9/9/2005
like how in gods name earth is that finished? there better be a sequel or i would never ever read your stories again!


DreamGirl101 chapter 14 . 9/9/2005
like that was hard choice sleep or be active i think i would sleep too
DragonFaeLynn chapter 28 . 9/8/2005
Make a sequel. That'd be great! Take care~
tRuELaDy0525 chapter 28 . 9/7/2005
I have to say that anything you write would be spectacular. May it be a sequel or not. Go with the flow, girl! I'll be damned sure to read it. LoL. And I'll rate a gazillion times too.
tRuELaDy0525 chapter 26 . 9/7/2005
Oh I teared up. I remember moving from Queens to Long Island.
tRuELaDy0525 chapter 24 . 9/7/2005
o oh i have that talen too and my boyfriend was amazed
tRuELaDy0525 chapter 22 . 9/7/2005
funny funny hahahaha
tRuELaDy0525 chapter 21 . 9/7/2005
aww poor guy
tRuELaDy0525 chapter 17 . 9/7/2005
oh oh, i take back everything i thought and said that I would do to him. LoL
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