Huh, go figure. Never though that would happen...wish you had extended the scene in her room, though, instead of paraphrasing it. But anyway, it's good otherwise. :)

Maybe it's just me, but he seems like kind of a bastard...good chapter though, but you might consider breaking it into more paragraphs, just a thought!

Ooh ... cliffy. Hhm. Are you sure 'insinuated' is the right word for the context you put it in?

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anyway, glad you finally updated!

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hey . . . long time no see (on fictionpress. And in real life, too! AN ENTIRE WEEK'S GONE BY! We need to have a sleepover soon). Kinda long paragraph with the memories. And kinda short chapter . . .Otherwise, very good! Her dad's a bit weird. What book is it that she was talking about? Or is there no particular book, you're just making it up? TELL ME IF THERE IS A PARTICULAR BOOK, I'D VERY MUCH LIKE TO READ IT!

pmg this is so good, the way you word every thing is soo so good

hmm...is she having past life flashbacks? Interesting twists we're having. It'll be interesting to see where this goes :D

Its good keep up the good work. I like the story.

Hey I think this is a great story, I WAMT MORE. It's really good.

I should probably point out that France isn't on any fault lines (at least I really don't think it is...I know Britain isn't, so I doubt France is). But other than that, it's not too bad. Your first couple chapters could use more describing what was going on than her telling us what was going on, though.

OOH, CLIFFY . . ..

Gee, she's .CLAUSTROPHOBIC, THOUGH, SO SHE COULDN'T REALLY HELP IT! . . .

Interesting, update soon.

Wowee! Dramadramadrama! Write more!

HAHAhAH! I GOT AN ACCOUNT! FEEL HAPPY!Yes, this is Young-Child-Rat-HaterSO NOW I CAN REVIEW YOUR STORY, HAHAHAHAHA!

Okay, I like ur story, BUT UR CHAPTERS ARE TOO SHORT! EVIL!Okay. UPDATE SOON OR I SHALL HARM YOU!Or not, seeing as ur stronger than me . . .

Maha! Good chapters! WRITE MORE!

Nice! I have a bit of cc, though. Why is everyone Scottish/Irish or whatever if you're in France? It makey no sense...y. A couple of misspelled words here and there, and that be it. It was a little short, though, so WRITE MORE! GAH!