Reviews for Metamorphosis
Elephant-Artist chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
Great use of descriptive words in this poem. I like the first part the most. Great job. Please read and review my stuff.
MockingbirdDreams chapter 1 . 8/27/2007
So sweet and beautiful. I adore it. It has just a whimsical feel!
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 7/16/2006
Lovely alliteration.
quazzarr too lazy to log in chapter 1 . 6/14/2006
omg i had a huge thing to tell you... and i hit shift esc which deleted EVERYTHING AH basically it siad..1 nice poem2 im never gunna ever read all 2202.5 i bet they all rock tho3 ill comment ur 6th entry4 i think you;ll like my lesbian lament5 something about ... i dont knoe..6 ... i was asking what sardonic meant5 after asking what sardonic meant ... i said that it might be what 4 is all about...6.. no.. 7 AH *confused* ... yea... ok... well imma go.. .cause i just messed with my head.. keep it up and ... 3 ...Quazzarr
toastyluv chapter 1 . 5/27/2006
this was very beautiful. I loved it so much. you are a great poet.
SirScott chapter 1 . 5/19/2006
Nice poem. I enjoyed its flow. I heard you were a good writer and you are.

Wishing You Good Health And Plenty Of Wealth, SirScott
bahaghari chapter 1 . 4/21/2006
Wow, Namir! The movement in this poem just blew me away. I love it.

It's always refreshing to find good writers here. Uh-huh, I think you're very talented.
D.M. Ralte chapter 1 . 4/14/2006
Wow. i love this! u'r writing style is truly unique. so much so that i had to go chek out your bio page he he. i do believ i'm met my match in musical/reading tastes. Definitely one of the most talented writers/poets on fictionpress.
in theory chapter 1 . 3/13/2006
Wow what a strange and absorbing bio. And you use language so flawlessly, it's addictive. (I'll be reading more when I get the time) peace
Jake chapter 1 . 3/7/2006
beautiful as always
cjwriter chapter 1 . 1/15/2006
Wow, very good! .
not sure yet chapter 1 . 11/8/2005
short and to the point, muchly nicely little piece here, good flow, well done
Charity F chapter 1 . 9/19/2005
lovely..."mold me into something new; something beautiful; for you"...truly amazing...

congrats on ur grill purchase! again, thanx so much for the review - its was very nice of you and made me feel special...

i'd love to see more poetry coming out of you, write about anything - about how the sky is green for all i care! your talent is inspiring for all of us...

D luvya!

Tabitha the Great
ValkyrieRavenfeather chapter 1 . 9/14/2005
Beautiful. Just so you know, I'm bisexual, too.
ACCOUNT NO LONGER ACTIVE 1 chapter 1 . 9/8/2005
Really beautiful, I lvoed it.
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