|Reviews for captured in fishnet stockings|
| stfnia chapter 1 . 6/2/2007
Popping dreams is not entertaining, but it tends to happen frequently.
| White Tea and Ginger chapter 1 . 10/30/2005
This is really sad, but it also made me smile. I'm not sure what to say about it, actually. It's written perfectly. Well done, as always.
| Calligrapher of Hearts chapter 1 . 2/7/2005
Wow. Original and captivating, kinda... Cabaret meets The Birdcage hehe. I like it! x
| do not resuscitate chapter 1 . 2/2/2005
'with a different kind of yearning in his eyes' - delightfully different. i loved the repititions and descriptions.
| Anninymous chapter 1 . 2/1/2005
Wow...that's great...very Broadway-y.
I know a family friend who writes poetry and she wrote a poem that sounds so much like that...
I loved the part about the glass figurine. (sp?)
| in theory chapter 1 . 2/1/2005
Wow that's amazing, I love the format it draws you in so easily. Nice work
| wooosh.POP chapter 1 . 1/27/2005
is that about james comming out of the closet? or is it peter? hehehe
as i said before, i'm like, so funny, it's not even...
| apromptedpoet chapter 1 . 1/27/2005
Sorry..I just noticed that when I was reading it! _ (I'm so stupid eh?)
I think this was good. The idea was original and I think it's a fun poem in a way but sad in another.
Anyways..Gay or not this is a good poem! (okies, I'll shut up now :P)
Much of Love-Suicidal_Greeting
| frugale chapter 1 . 1/25/2005
If I can say it so, 'Watches the boys' soccer practice/with a different kind of yearning in his eyes' surely is an excellent and delightful thesis statement for a poem. Matter of speech, of course. You managed to handle repetition very efficiently. Keep it up, your poems are jewels for the brain and eyes, and I hope the best is yet to be.
| RatherFresh chapter 1 . 1/25/2005
good poem.. i've never really read anything like this before. wonderful voice and word choice. i really like it. great job.
| Joewhatever chapter 1 . 1/22/2005
Overall, I liked this. The seemed kind of anti-climactic compared to the rest of the poem though. And the random 'you' just before the "let him run away" line I didn't think fit. The entire poem is in third person except for that line...it's just kind of out of place. Apart from that, nice work. :D
| Hannah is a Palindrome chapter 1 . 1/22/2005
Really cool. I like the concept.
| thosewhomustbecarried chapter 1 . 1/22/2005
Lovely descriptions. I like the repetition of your ideas, as they are not quite so easy to grasp the first time around. You're alright. Keep 'em coming. Cheers.
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 1/22/2005
I love the abstract vein that flows within this. Keep up the good work.
| origamikitty chapter 1 . 1/22/2005
Wow, that was great ) And I love how you don't really, come flat out and say it, leaving the reader kinda guessing for a while. The only part that I didn't care for was "wads of cash". It's just one of those expressions I don't like; you know how it is.