Reviews for Into the Arms of Jealousy
BelovedMoon chapter 1 . 8/23/2005
Wow, gee, I wonder where you got your inspiration for this? This is Renee, by the way. I think if I ever really write a book, it will be published under the name of good ol' G.P. Anyway, back to the matter at hand, I'll set aside the subject matter of the song and critique you solely on technical merits. I like the raw emotion in the poem, and that it's not held down by the desire to be pretentious. The rhyming was subtle (to me at least) and effective, and poignant. I like it!
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/23/2005
that's what i thought it meant... lol... i really like it... i felt that way with my ex.. nice job
darkypal22 chapter 1 . 1/22/2005
very nice, good flow, kudos