Reviews for Unfortunatly Dusty Fragments
poisonous chapter 1 . 3/19/2005
Oh yes, that was swet. I love the flow and the short beauty of it's form. Wow. I really enjoyed that, I'm going to read it some more. :)
ACCOUNT NO LONGER ACTIVE 1 chapter 1 . 3/1/2005
That's great! Wonderfully described and I think the way it flows is great. The structure is interesting too.
Soviet chapter 1 . 2/14/2005
Intresting.. I like the imagry.

However.. I think giving this poem a slightly more structured flow might have done more good.. however it's still rather good.
Bleeding Ink chapter 1 . 1/23/2005
Unable to get your thoughts together? Well written. I like the mood of the poem, too. Just so melancholy.