It was probably brilliant when performed with sounds effects. I love Godzilla and this poem is worthy of the Mightly Lizard King. Glad to see it won some sort of contest.

~Cirien Phoenix

Heh, I can see why it won. It's delightfully hilarious with vivid scenes of mass destruction. I wish I could see it performed.

And thanks for the review. :)

Dear God, where are my pants? Oh no! I've laughed them off! Dammit!

Good one. I'd like to have seen the performance- I bet ther were lots of crying children.

Stomp, tromp, crunch, munch, chew, spew... This was fun to read. X)

That was... extremely entertaining.

I wish I could have been there to see that performed. That would have been equally amusing. ::Sighs:: Oh well.

I think you do have a very good talent for parody work. Personally, I can't do it. P Not a very good lyricist/poet. I used to think so, but... eheheh. I'll just stick to writing.

Well, that made me promptly laugh my head off XD P.S.: Could you R&R my story, Project: Black Feenix?

Wow...that was really good..._

HERSHEY!Good to see you, babe. Starting to miss your really awesome poetry skills (and it now seems I'll be missing it a lot more...) We're all rooting for you on getting those published, and I haven't got a doubt that you probably could. Your poetry is really good stuff, (and the style I like with the really tight rhyme scheme, which is some of why I'm partial to it) and it's also deep and searching, and you can hear its rhythm in your head. Great for reading out loud, especially from me, I'd like to wish you good luck on getting those poems published someday.

Oh... what? About THIS poem? is funny. What else can I say? It really strikes me as being funny.

First, the words fit into the pentameter of the origional song very well, which means you could actually sing the song with these words substituted, (which is fun as well as annoying to those around you)(Speaking of which, I am now going to have to download "It's a Small World After All" or something because I honestly can't recall how the tune of the verses go...)

Secondly, the premise is origional. Because it IS fairly obvious that this would seem to be a small world to Godzilla, but I wouldn't have thought of making a song parody about it. And it works splendidly.

Thirdly, the dialogue is clever and just plain funny. You read them and immediately come down with irrational helpless giggling.

All in all, I really like this, Hershey. Keep it up with writing that poetry of yours. Good luck,_Ahrar

awesome lyrics. i love your sense of humor. this is great. nice rhyme and rhythm. i like how it almost seems to be in limerick form, fitting for a parody. brilliantly written, i like this a lot. i don't mind your use of technical language. we did that a lot last year in ap english also. anyway, i like the alliteration also in this poem. and you know, you have some internal rhyme as well. o great job on this. keep writing!

LOL :) hilarious

*smiles* *laughs* this was amusing and made me laugh. Godzilla rocks!

cute, though u seem to brag in ur summary..cool

damn this is hillarious. nice job