Reviews for Straight Lines
Kaira5 chapter 1 . 12/20/2008
This reminds me a lot of my own feelings. Currently, I'm writing my own run away novel (not yet up) and that's really bringing out my emotions too. I always have the 'there's more I can do then just sitting in a classroom all day learning stuff I'll hopefully never use in real life' feeling. GREAT JOB! Are you going to continue? Cause this is really awesome.
Sam Loomis chapter 1 . 3/19/2005
Wow... I like that. I would be very sad if you ran off and left mee :(

It's really good, though. I'd hug you if you were around right now.

I feel that way a lot.. there's somethin out there but I can't get it from where I am. It's a helplessness that really hurts inside. At least, to me...

Prose poetry ish interesting. I like it. _
InfiniteDreamer04 chapter 1 . 2/19/2005
I feel the exact same way like...all the time. They say its just 'part of being a teenager' but i dunno...They say we all feel this way when we're 'young' but what happens to the feeling when we get old? Do we see the purpose of staying here, or do we just get tired of dreaming seemingly hopeless dreams? Nice work. Keep writing!

-dare to dream-