Reviews for White Lightning
And-Pigs-May-Fly chapter 4 . 3/23/2006
Um, i'm Filipino, and Philippines is spelled like that, not Philippeans. Just a little costructive criticism, dont get mad at me! Do you read manga? if you do, ther's this awsome one called w juliet, where a guy dresses as a girl so he can pursue his acting career, and he is helped by a girl who looks like a guy!
Claire chapter 4 . 1/30/2006
Gr8 Story Gurl!...Im so sorry to hear bout your granpa...bt please update soon becoz this story rox and u are a very good writer xoxo
Im just jin chapter 5 . 12/23/2005
yea, i said it before, but sorry... ;Its okay... but update when you can alright? Ill be here waiting to read! because this story is really interesting!
Hell's first Icicle chapter 5 . 10/14/2005
sh girl. shut up! don't apologise! itz not ur fault about ur poor grandpa! i hav a frend hus dying from cancer...
Hell's first Icicle chapter 3 . 10/14/2005
l0lz. all that going thru his head and that's all he can say? ahahah
Hell's first Icicle chapter 2 . 10/14/2005
ah! that guyz a freaky gud runner! .
gypsylass chapter 4 . 9/29/2005
AwEsOMe... keep writing!
Nokturnal Augury chapter 4 . 9/28/2005
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MUST HAVE MORE

...yesterday!
BlackFireyPhoenix86 chapter 4 . 9/27/2005
I like this story.. Sam is cool, I like Sam.. Addy is cool too.. I like it so far, it had a lot of action in it, which I like..

Keep up the good work _...

Can't wait until the next chapter..
Kaylin chapter 4 . 9/27/2005
This story is really good! I love the plot. Good job and keep up the great work...I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Tenshistar chapter 4 . 9/27/2005
Cool. Interesting. PLease update again soon.
j0zz chapter 3 . 9/1/2005
man this story made me tear. shes so kind. i wish you would update this story quick.
KELLY4SVS chapter 3 . 3/25/2005
i really want to know were this is going. i guess hes mad he assumed she was old.i see he hasn;t bothered to thank her. ha keep writing
Sarah chapter 4 . 3/19/2005
I really like this story. I can sort of see where you're going with it, but not really (in a good way-I want to keep following it so I can figure it out). As for being published: I totally wouldn't rule it out, but would consider what you put on FictionPress as sort of a first rough draft (even if you reedit the chapters individually before posting). Write it all, then go back and reread the whole story thinking about what you need to firm up. But I think you have a good shot. Hope things get better for you!

Sarah

P.S. - I'm the same Sarah that anon reviewed Fighting For Love, and despite what that other reviewer wrote, it's not that I'm a "coward" and won't leave a signed in review, it's that I don't have an account. Planning on getting one, but waiting until I have something to post. I'll let you know when/if I get one so you can comment on my work like I have commented on yours.
hi chapter 4 . 2/26/2005
i like white lightning...i think you could write more if you want...bi
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