Reviews for White Lightning |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Um, i'm Filipino, and Philippines is spelled like that, not Philippeans. Just a little costructive criticism, dont get mad at me! Do you read manga? if you do, ther's this awsome one called w juliet, where a guy dresses as a girl so he can pursue his acting career, and he is helped by a girl who looks like a guy! |
![]() ![]() Gr8 Story Gurl!...Im so sorry to hear bout your granpa...bt please update soon becoz this story rox and u are a very good writer xoxo |
![]() ![]() ![]() yea, i said it before, but sorry... ;Its okay... but update when you can alright? Ill be here waiting to read! because this story is really interesting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() sh girl. shut up! don't apologise! itz not ur fault about ur poor grandpa! i hav a frend hus dying from cancer... |
![]() ![]() ![]() l0lz. all that going thru his head and that's all he can say? ahahah |
![]() ![]() ![]() ah! that guyz a freaky gud runner! . |
![]() ![]() ![]() AwEsOMe... keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() _ _ _ _ MUST HAVE MORE ...yesterday! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this story.. Sam is cool, I like Sam.. Addy is cool too.. I like it so far, it had a lot of action in it, which I like.. Keep up the good work _... Can't wait until the next chapter.. |
![]() ![]() This story is really good! I love the plot. Good job and keep up the great work...I can't wait to read the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool. Interesting. PLease update again soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() man this story made me tear. shes so kind. i wish you would update this story quick. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i really want to know were this is going. i guess hes mad he assumed she was old.i see he hasn;t bothered to thank her. ha keep writing |
![]() ![]() I really like this story. I can sort of see where you're going with it, but not really (in a good way-I want to keep following it so I can figure it out). As for being published: I totally wouldn't rule it out, but would consider what you put on FictionPress as sort of a first rough draft (even if you reedit the chapters individually before posting). Write it all, then go back and reread the whole story thinking about what you need to firm up. But I think you have a good shot. Hope things get better for you! Sarah P.S. - I'm the same Sarah that anon reviewed Fighting For Love, and despite what that other reviewer wrote, it's not that I'm a "coward" and won't leave a signed in review, it's that I don't have an account. Planning on getting one, but waiting until I have something to post. I'll let you know when/if I get one so you can comment on my work like I have commented on yours. |
![]() ![]() i like white lightning...i think you could write more if you want...bi |