|Reviews for Ocean|
| Englishrose1986 chapter 1 . 5/10/2005
I love the rhyme scheme in this poem, n the imagery too...'ocean as smooth as glass', its so sweet. love it!:)
| Patrick Vicens chapter 1 . 3/21/2005
again nice flow, love the use of images.
| EWindheim chapter 1 . 1/24/2005
WOW! Holy moly! This is amazing work! So descriptive! wow wow wow! Awesome work!
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 1/24/2005
Beautiful and breathtaking, with a hint of sorrow, I love it, keep up the good work.