Reviews for Torn
nofaceme chapter 2 . 7/21/2006
this is very interesting. I liked the confetti part and the ending is deffinatly wonderful. It's such a clincher that it's almost shocking. I didn't understand if you meant to write the word "whole" or "hole" typo? I don't really know if that's how you wanted it to be said or not. lolgreat work.p. for the review! I wish I had more time to go back and re-write that story and the continuing chapters. It was actually written as stream of conciousness so that's why it is so rough! lol thanks and luck
CostumeForAGutterball chapter 1 . 1/25/2005
Powerful! So good i love it! keep writing!
PhoenixInAshes chapter 1 . 1/25/2005
Nice.