WOW...i love this story.

this is was a rly good story. liked it.

Yeah! I finished reading just a while ago.

I really like Lucas' character. At first I thought he was just a dumb cop, since he always got tricked by Ginger at the beginning of the story. But then he was the one who thought up all solution to bring her out desperate situation. That was real cool!

And Ginger was also another of my fave. A real tough chick. Slippery, gutsy, and definitely tricky, even though she liked to ignore her instincts and kept charging ahead into problematic situations that seemed to follow her every step.

I definitely enjoy your writing. And I'd like to thank you very much for writing this and giving me a chance to become acquainted with it.

This story is fabulous!

And I haven't finished reading it yet.

I just can't help myself from giving it a review.

I really like this story it had a great plot. Took a lot of thought to think of all that. The only thing I'd have to say I don't like is all the bad grammar... Most of your words were misspelled.

Well a damn good story thats for sure! I really should be in bed sleeping, but i had to finish reading this story first. I really liked how ginger and lucas fought still worked together. Hmm i still suspect That Vana has mystical powers as has Beverly. I guess Lucas has proved himself to Brian and her father? Hmm good that this with shovel murder is out...well they couldnt give her more than a pat on the hand...after all justice got served in this case.

do another story like this!

Sounds interesting...

hehe

“Nope,” she said, her heart pounded as he called her sweety. “I left my heart in the freezer.”

I think sweety should be sweetly xD

Sorry for being over... picky.

Oh wow. This story is amazing. I love the law aspect to it as well. But seriously just... wow. I guessed the Attorney DA as the father right away and I knew Veronica had been the one who was there to actually witness the murderer but WOW SHE was Joanna? God, that is seriously just insanely... wow. Haha. Stunned me. I feel like everyone in this fic was too goddamned smart for me. Usually I have the chance to figure things out as clues are dropped but it seemed like Ginger and Lucas and everyone else just always detected the lies straight away, looking into things that I didn't even realize needed looking into. Wow, maybe that's just proof that I should give up any hopes of being a lawyer, lol.

This fic though... wow, I really love it. I know I keep saying that and I probably sound like a ditz for doing so but seriously I am just... awed (: Plus, the chemistry between Lucas & Ginger is great :D He :D it makes me so happy that he survived! I was like HOLY SHIT THIS IS NOT HAPPENING T_T When I read that he got shot and there was no pulse. I think Lucas really was onto something when he was talking about Vana having some sort of weird powers.

M I love this I love this I love this *adds to favorites* I wish there were more incredible fics out there like this. It really made me think - which is nice because as much as I love those all-out high school romance cliches, even I have to admit that varying the scene a bit is a nice change (:

You're an amazing writer. There were a few grammatical errors, and your spelling of "Okay" as "Okey" always seemed to bug me because I would read it as okie, which just sounds plain weird, but I got over it. What's funny is that sometimes I would read Ginger's name as George... which now I think I think about it is funny because George Lucas. Okay wow ahahah I'm a dork don't mind me (:

You're an excellent writer and I will definitely check out more of your works, especially if you slipped a little of Lucas & Ginger into one of your stories (: I could never mind a little more of them... or a lot more of them :D Haha. Keep up the great work! You must be insanely smart to even think of all this. This story is freaking brilliant.

- Alyssa

LOVED IT.

I can only imagine how much time, talent and passion it toke you to write this story. Its like a great mystery novel with romance in it 2. There are some stories you read and you think to yourself 'i should be reading this story out of a book I paid for, than on the internet for free'. Yours is defiantly one of those stories. There is so cliche what-so-ever in this story, its so utterly original.

In my opinion your a good author if you can turn a cliche into your own by putting a different spin on the story, but Brilliant authors with loads of talent can come up with a totally unique plot. You are one of those authors.

While I was reading this story I got a weird feeling that it was going to end up like two of the stories I've read that were really good but uterly heartbreaking at the end when the male main character dies (its always the male, never the female) and when Lucas got shoot at the end of the last chapter, my heart sank, I thought you were going to ruin your story like the authors of the other two stories by killing him off. Thank god he didnt I don't think I could cope knowing I sat here for 4 hours reading your story only to be disappointed by the crap ending.

Your characteristion (don't think i spelt that right :p) is also very good, you built up Lucas and Ginger's characters, by expressing there emotions brilliantly and portraying their love for each other.

Thanks for writing a great ending and never disappointing me with your brilliant piece of writing. xoxo

Wow, i just read this story and I love it. I'm amazed that you managed to write such a story within a year -well done! And I love how the story is cliche in a not overly-cliche way. And thanks for making Ginger so smart. I love smart female characters. Keep writing!

Wow! Lucas and Ginger now make up and now together! Hooay! I hope she is safe with Lucas. Hurry update soon.