Reviews for Chromosome Box
DreamlessTemptation chapter 1 . 1/4/2009
I like it.
HellHeartedlyBent chapter 1 . 9/29/2005
holds to truth like breath clamps to lungs. good job.
pneumothorax chapter 1 . 6/19/2005
Odd and unusual. Not my favourite, but still good. (mm, constructive review. love 'em)
Unholy Haven chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
Very interesting poem! I think you write very well.
Kat-Renee Kittel chapter 1 . 5/7/2005
Your writing is very vivid and descriptive, and effectively influences the reader's thoughts.

However you should change the rating for this poem and the 5,0 to at least K, because of the depth of what is being said would be lost on someone younger (and the use of h* in 5,0).All the best and keep writing. -Kat
Stassney chapter 1 . 4/18/2005
this is great as well!
The Course chapter 1 . 3/13/2005
ha ha that's funny. i like the last line.
LVYThN chapter 1 . 2/14/2005
Haha... It makes me smile (need I say more?) I like it ~LVYThN
Last Straw chapter 1 . 2/3/2005
i love the last line!
Shadow.Lieutenant chapter 1 . 1/25/2005
Nice stuff! I love that last line ... "and cuss at your mother in a language no one knows." I've always though babies curse when they're born ...
Chandra-Moon chapter 1 . 1/25/2005
lol...for the most part, a very serious poem, but for some reason the last line made me laugh.

like it...keep writing
WarriorHeart chapter 1 . 1/25/2005
kinda funny in a warped sense... at least my warped sense. ; )