This seems like it should be in the Play's category. But I am in love with it.

Are you a filmmaker, by any chance?

I ask because this story is in screenplay format. Reply to my e-mail if you don't mind.

apottsfilm at g[x]mail dot com

... without the x, of course.

I like your writing and I'd like to see more of your screenwork.

oh, I hope you will update soon, because I have fallen in love with your story, even though it is written drama style...not my favorite form of literature...but after the first few chapters you get used to it. Yeah, update soon and make me happy!

this story is awesome!you should definetly keep writing!

Ok, I have reviewed this story for like every chapter and this stupid site won't let me review more than once for each, so here I am back to drive you nuts in an anonymous review. Plz tell me you are going to give a Mikey an Rain chappy soon Blen or I'm gonna go absofrigging (i made that up) nuts! And I also need some PDA updates too BTW. Heck I need... psychiatric help I do believe, lol. Ok, I'm done ranting anonysmously, lol, yeah. laterz

You might be happy to learn that your story was my motivation for doing my Spanish project...which is incridibly pathetic that I only did it today, when it was assigned a week ago...and is due tomorrow. **sigh** At least I think I did a pretty good job. Everytime I finished part of it, I let myself read a bit...which was nice. I like this story a lot, even though

Noel get's on my nerves a bit...he's adorable, but he reminds me of an annoying girl from my school that has to take special classes...**shudder**

I like Craig the most, I think...he reminds me a bit of myself, even though my family is not full of over-achievers (my dad is kinda pushy, though). Heheh, glasses rock!

I like the story, the plot is awesome, and I will be sure to read the next chapter.

OMG, yay for the updatage going on! And no worries about the amount of time you take in between, because in the end it's truly worth it, so I'm glad. Oh, this chapter was so cute, hilarious and simply...awesome! The Rain and Mikey fluff is always adorable and very much substantial, and we all love our pervs so a good ol' props and high five to Rain! XD It's good they finally revealed the admirer(s) although Mikey obviously didn't care and Craig has no reason to care at this point! Yay for the Trent and Craigness too! They're together, uh huh, uh huh...you know it! *does a crazy togetherness dance* I'm glad for them and as always, cute and lovable, Craig is just so...aw! I must simply gush over him...and now. About Noel...hehe no worries, I hope Noel doesn't remain alone but it's okay I trust ya, so no worries here! Keep it up though, you've got some talent for your age, I've read some of your other works too! Keep it up though, good luck with your writing and can't wait!Reviewer anonymous

AWSOMENESS!...like wow...but yeah like totally awsomeness...more..more..more...or wut not cause frankly im losing my mind but yeah awsome story like i read what you have so far today and yesterday and i finally made my account like work...(my lazyness exceeds me) an like i love it!

*yays* this was an awesome chapter for Craig! *dances* i love that couple the most, i think. can't help it, Craig's a cutie.

and my 'update sense' told me this was going to update soon. everytime something i have on alert is about to update, i can feel it, and start thinking about the fic itself. strange, i know, but it's true.

i've been thinking about this fic for the past 3 days. and here's the update. coincidence? i think not.

there it atleast looks like i signed in...me and my lazy self hehe i soo love noel..and rain mikey and craig are cool but...theyre not the same _ rofl O i cant believe the pestering thing from youdontknowmyname -yes i do- worked hehe she keeps telling me to write her a ryan and chad story and well... lets just say that hasnt worked out rofl i know if she doesnt stop i'll update one of her least favorites _ ryan's diary IN YOUR FACE!rofl sorry ok not really but maybe a pinch hehe WAIT! one more chapeteer til the end? * ( oh well _ hehe it doesnt change anything! hehe im gonna start doing that tomorrow its like-sorry i havent updated ina while but school just started and i have gym first period SO by second hour im drained and cant sneak in any stories..ok i cant use that i had gym first thing last year and i still wrote...dang -_- rofl whatever having too much fun talking but as my sister has said before, "stop writing an essay" STOP TYPING ON MY COMPUTER rofl jk peace out for now _)/ oh its natalie merchant later!

Oh god... I think I'm in love.

In love with every single pervert in each and every one of your stories.

It's all your fault!

Rain, Trent, Zimmie, Bar Guy and (who else?) have all captured my (multiple) heart(s). Don't break my hearts, oh lovely ones. Compensate these organs with smutty slashy stuff, please.

Ugh. What the hell have I been eating?

Aw... but Rain didn't get a decent grope. Until later then...

-Sugar

hmm... finally craig got together with trent.. but what bout noel? dont want him to be too lonely you know. and stupid mikey, annouce your bloody relationship with rain! its nothing bad ok! in fact its far beyond good...

OMG! OMG! OMG! You updated! I'm so proud of you! lol It's a very good chapter too, Yay for Craig and Trent. Now we just need some Rain and Mikey and all will be right with the world. Woohoo for Blen! You go girl! heehee, ima shut up now cuz this looks embarassing even to me. lol laterz

if my mum gets famous being mentioned in an authors book i claim half the money rofl dont mind me _ ok do for your sake ignore everything i have written for the past day and a half and you will probably be declared sane _ im going to go find somethin else to read so if THE BLOND strikes any other stories...dont be surprised

im not going to be mean to her HOW COULD YOU JUST RUIN A MOMENT LIKE THAT rofl jk _ kids *grumbles*hehe moving on before theres another knock on my door i swear in the past hour theres been five *glares at nobody in particular*