|Reviews for DoubleEdge Sword|
| CucumberPickles chapter 1 . 10/17/2005
Who is this directed to? There were a couple of mistakes like forgetting to space and making it a 'you' instead of 'your'. But, since they're so minor, I guess it doesn't matter much.
| poetic abortion chapter 1 . 1/26/2005
~* Noelle *~
| Ela-chan chapter 1 . 1/25/2005
'Hatred in you eyes' - typo! Damn those things.
I like this, but I don't like the lack of punctuation. I know what you're getting at, because I can see the picture clearly in my head, but a few periods or commas would better it a little. Like, a final say, or something.
You wanna know why I like this? Well, it's kind of like a monologue of a twisted little girl sharpening her little pretty blade. Those images get me and tickle me pink. HEE. Kudos to you. And nice work
| firemounrain chapter 1 . 1/25/2005
che? a name? very good description.