|Reviews for Every Move I Make|
| method acting chapter 1 . 10/12/2005
All right. The rhyming in this peice seems rather forced, but the emotion is pure. Most of your peices seem like this. You need to work on channeling your emotions better. You obviously feel strongly, and you need to put that great feeling into words and formatting that flow and better describe what you are going through. Or perhaps just an idea. In any case, nice peice. Lovely job.
| firemounrain chapter 1 . 1/30/2005
I really like this one. the line "So please quit being so cruel" sounds a little too juvenile for a love poem, to me. And I've never understood why a guy crying is such a catastrophe.
| QueenVixta chapter 1 . 1/26/2005
I like the whole theme of the song and where you're coming from. Rhyming just needs a little bit of work. But very good job!
| Manda chapter 1 . 1/25/2005
Hey Rue that song was beautiful your a good song writer. *smiles*