|Reviews for Pain Untold: Simple Emotion|
| aeolyn chapter 1 . 6/1/2005
Powerful and emotional. Great job. Loved the lines "Together, yet forever apart/Repelling each other in a constant dance"
| PirateGrrl chapter 1 . 2/6/2005
This is very powerful. Well done.
| Rosaline chapter 1 . 1/27/2005
Wow. I really liked that. Espically the last few lines about doing stupid things to know that your well done!
| Eleanor Gibson chapter 1 . 1/27/2005
I loved it. Well written, and powerful. Amazing work, I loved everything about it, I can't even begin to be specific.-Rae