Reviews for designer love
andrealiz chapter 1 . 10/6/2006
i love this. i especailly like the last stanza; very effective. :]
Chi Ame chapter 1 . 7/27/2005
Wow, I'm in love with your writing style! It reads smoothly, and is quite a sad story, too. Great ending, pulls it all together nicely.
godsandstars chapter 1 . 7/8/2005
oh wow...this is really really good. it makes me think of a barbie doll...maybe it was supposed to XD this is so good. great job!
citrus scented chapter 1 . 6/27/2005
fantastic piece. just love it. the materalism, the fake ness, the emotions- very clever piece. beautiful delicous descriptions aswell "Cutout smiles super-glued onto/Flawless complexion," infectious.
elenlinde chapter 1 . 6/11/2005
omgosh i love this!

especially the last part.

"100 percent plastic(completely washable.)"

the "(completely washable.)" part is almost irrelevant and yet totally makes sense.

(did that make sense? i think not.)
EmbersAblaze-IgnitedIcicle chapter 1 . 5/1/2005
that was so fresh and twisted i laughed at the end- at the quick potent imagery, not you or your work! :P
the cereal killer chapter 1 . 4/17/2005
This is okay. It makes for an okay extended metaphor. The descriptions are okay. Typical. And some of them aren't okay enough - "Pierre cardin" is not very branded.

I'm doing this just to tell you how much I do not appreciate your superficial one-liner reviews. I am currently gravely insulted/annoyed. If I could delete them, they would have promptly been removed.
hmmmmm chapter 1 . 3/12/2005
i love the way this all flows together...your word choice is perfect and beautiful.

"Water smudged ink runsAcross anorexic arms(as if trying to make herself last forever)"...genius.
amphiboly chapter 1 . 2/25/2005
and flowers chapter 1 . 1/27/2005
i like it a lot. especially the ending

"100 percent plastic(completely washable)"

i am a sucker for good endings, and i like the concept of it, and every lines makes sense. it actually flows well, i think, to argue with another reviewer. (bridgette's tears?) i really like this, and your style of writing. i'll be reading more.

(thank you for your review)
negligible fictional force chapter 1 . 1/26/2005
contemporary lovely, you have a completely-your-own style. intelligent concept, i love it love it, and your poetry is my supernovas. -kismet.
laughter at the funeral chapter 1 . 1/26/2005
this is just so so good...very very very good imagery...this is just so wow...

minor blah blahs...

some of the breaking of the lines are quite awkward to be read...just like...

Fake furs around sexy leather miniskirts

"with" skimpy lace underwear...

oh and pls...if you have the time...pls do review some of my works...thanks...

truly yours...