Reviews for Sick
anon chapter 1 . 2/4/2007
Is this about bulimia?
Smoky Bear chapter 1 . 11/7/2005
flawless, impeccable and beautiful, well done.
Muted Prose chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
Woah. For a second, I felt as if I were sick-feeling what the character in the poem felt. This is great work, and thanks for reviewing me! ~MP
kit feral chapter 1 . 5/21/2005
"Anyway, Its her mind that needs saving". That line really stuck out. And the part about being sick of winter- I could really relate. Winter really gets me down. So dark and cold. Anyway, this was really great! The raw emotions- I love how your poetry can really make me feel the pain. Keep writing!
Opium Hex chapter 1 . 3/23/2005
Wonderful ! Sometimes numbness can be a friend which saves you from your desires. I have found this at times in my life.
Pink Hippo chapter 1 . 1/31/2005
oh damn kid, you make me want to hug you ._. a powerful poem, and i liked the recurring fire imagery. it was a bit stretched out, but the rawness of it all made it all work. good jobbin (and thanks for the review _)
Aslan Israel chapter 1 . 1/26/2005
hehe. too much of a good thing makes for a lot of a bad thing... great job here.