deathtousall84 chapter 1 . 2/18/2005
i like ur style man, but clean shit up a lil if you know what i mean right?
Benton chapter 1 . 2/7/2005
I like it, it talks about alot of things going on around the world, in other countries. What was your motive?
Eternal Gabreille chapter 1 . 2/2/2005
i like this poem. It sounds a lot like something we learned in history that i'm not going to even attempt to spell. But I enjoyed it, i needed colorful graphics in my life right about now.
Exiled-Knight chapter 1 . 1/27/2005
For the first time I've actually heard the song you quoted at the beginning. I enjoyed this, it's unfaultingly true, and sad in that fact.