Reviews for Veiled Melody
SaveMeToo chapter 1 . 2/7/2005
I'm not sure I got it all, but I luv all the parellel's you draw with your words in this one!

thatgirl1116 chapter 1 . 1/30/2005
this is really fantastic. the language and vocabulary is really romantic and intoxicating.
Mango Motercycle chapter 1 . 1/29/2005
omg mallory you are soo very talented...i love the metaphors!
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/27/2005
This dancing is a maquerade.. masquerade

it is shakespearean and well done
DOORphrame chapter 1 . 1/26/2005
Interesting. I like the discriptive words and the idea behind it. Keep writing.