Reviews for Destination Road
Deavon Brooks chapter 1 . 2/10/2005
Wow, I totally know how you feel. A very clear metaphor is used in the poem... I absolutely love this: the emotions expressed, and esp. the ending: a very unhappy - and realistic one. Great job! I love this. P.S: sorry for taking so long to review people who have reviewed me.
Crazy Biene chapter 1 . 2/6/2005
I dont know but u used "they say" a couple of times. well written though.
sarcastic-student chapter 1 . 2/5/2005
Deep, yet it had a sort of airy quality about it. Well done.
DukDog27 chapter 1 . 2/4/2005
Nice juxtaposition between what "they say" and what you tell yourself. 3rd stanza is great, flows very well.
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 1/28/2005
Really cool 3 You made it flow so nicely. Had a personal and angsty feel to it. - Well done.

* Noelle *
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/27/2005
I like it... its very cool.. it all ties together and flows nicely... do you know how to make it into stanzas though? if not I could show you
Maxwell K chapter 1 . 1/26/2005
Can this poem be any more trye about life. I guess we have to settle with how life is instead of what it can be. Wonderfully written!