Reviews for With You
twistedICYjunk chapter 3 . 2/16/2005
I love the plot, and except for a few tense issues, it's error free! The only thing you should maybe add is like some more description of the place she is in, the house, and her day-to-day activities. It's a great story!
jammi chapter 3 . 2/16/2005
Clavie...I had I told you lately that you're brilliant? No, well I will now. You my dear are brilliant. :D

VERY very very good chappie.
Aestas Memoriola chapter 3 . 2/16/2005
Mwah. Perfection. As always.

Aestas Memoriola chapter 2 . 2/16/2005
Oh. Love it!


P.S. I suck at reviews... Can you tell?
Kat chapter 2 . 2/5/2005
Awesome Claves.

I won't let me sign in...

But it was awesome!

Can't wait for the next one!

Love Kat.
jammi chapter 2 . 2/4/2005
sweet, there were some spelling mistakes but other than that really sweet. :D
Unangelichalo chapter 1 . 2/2/2005
I'm intrigued. I like this!

Update soon!

Love Kat.
jammi chapter 1 . 1/27/2005
Read it at mcbc, this one sounds tres interesting, :D, can't wait to see what happens.
Angel-Lija chapter 1 . 1/27/2005
Great start. I was however wondering if the date in the begining is wrong, it says 1971 but the story talks about royalty and old fashioned names, not to mention mines, are you sure you didn't mean to say 1871 or 1671?
Emv1986 chapter 1 . 1/27/2005
This sounds very interesting so far. I can't wait to see what happens.
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