Reviews for With You
Skeptic-Critic chapter 13 . 6/22/2006
She's pregnant...Isn't she? Morning sickness...And no protection...It's got to be...A BABY! How exciting...
Skeptic-Critic chapter 12 . 6/22/2006
Wow...I was way off wasn't I? Kinda understandable though...I've been on a movie marathon ever since school got out for the summer about two weeks ago...You know...Four or five movies a day and all...guess yesterday's movies? "Pride and Prejudice", "A Walk to Remember", "The Kid", "How to Succeed in Business Without really trying", "That Touch of Mink" and then "Pirates of the Caribbean"...The only one I'd actually seen before was "Pirates"...the rest were new to me...And in my own defense, a)my memories not that great anyway, and b) A walk to remember does have all the night scenes and everything and he names a star after her and the whole telescope thing and all...So it wasn't that far of a stretch...And least not for my poor, tired mind...
Skeptic-Critic chapter 11 . 6/22/2006
*more squeals* I couldn't help but hug myself when she realized she loved him...How cute...

I know the reference! I think...From a "Walk to Remember"? I was going to say something about it but apparently it's there on purpose so...
Skeptic-Critic chapter 10 . 6/22/2006
Aw...He's adorable...I love him...Even if she won't admit to it yet, I will...I just wanna hug him...I'm glad she finally did...

My toes are curling and I honestly can't help squealing and cooing...He was so sweet through this whole chapter...
Skeptic-Critic chapter 9 . 6/22/2006
"Really, how is that I dared to fall in love with my wife?"

It's lines like that that I fall in love with...
Skeptic-Critic chapter 8 . 6/22/2006
No...They were so cute too...Why couldn't he come the next day? Hmph...
Skeptic-Critic chapter 7 . 6/22/2006
Aww...He's trying to become a better person for her...How sweet...
Skeptic-Critic chapter 6 . 6/22/2006
Oh...I'm tearing up now, just so you know...
Skeptic-Critic chapter 5 . 6/22/2006
Oh...I don't think she realized what a soft spot Michael's death is for him...I wonder how long it'll take her to realize...
Skeptic-Critic chapter 4 . 6/22/2006
Poor Luke...I think he might've been just a little jealous...Not neccessarily of Anthony...Just of how close Anthony and Caitlyn were...Friendship I mean...
Skeptic-Critic chapter 3 . 6/22/2006
Ah...I really want to give him a hug...As wierd as that may sound, he seems so much like a lost puppy dog...YOu know the kinds of dogs that've had a bad past and so aren't really the rollicky little puppies? He kinda reminds me of that...
Skeptic-Critic chapter 2 . 6/22/2006
Even if he doesn't really show it to her, he's really kinda sweet...
Skeptic-Critic chapter 1 . 6/22/2006
I'm rather glad you decided to thank everyone who had read the Evencourt series at the beginning of "When Dreams Begin" because otherwise, I might've started with that one...And whether it has anything to do with these other ones or not, I have to read things in order...So of course I have to read these ones first...Not that I mind...Especially not with a prologue like that...Probably the most important chapter of any story...it's the one that can make or break you because that's where the hook is, and that's what brings the readers in...
lol chapter 1 . 3/14/2006
um i think a lotta people who love your story are goning to stone me for this but..i think this should be on similar to lynn kurland's book..especially the first n second chapter..totally,incredibly,101% 's all i needed to nice sure but..it should be on said.
Brittany chapter 14 . 2/18/2006
Aw..this is such a sweet romance! I greatly enjoyed reading it and wanted to thank you for all the time and effort you put into it. Keep up the good work!
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