Reviews for With You
DarkestSecrets chapter 14 . 2/5/2006
this story is so good! it deserves a thousand more reviews than it has lolz! just a few typos, but other than that, this story is FABULOUS! i love historical storys! haha there are only a few good ones on FP and yours is definitely one of them!

now to da story...i have a feeling something bad is gonna happen *mysterious music plays*. always does when characters in a story starts thinking they're in heaven lol. and i hate that mrs. covington, ahem, i mean adamson. there's sumthin very fishy about her. and god she is heartless, her son is dead and all she wants is his property, it's no wonder michael loves caitlyn more than his mother...

she is those typical money craving bitch! argh i hate her, even though she doesn't exist...

anywayz great story and UPDATE SOON!PLS PLS PLS DON'T STOP SUCH A GOOD STORY! it'll be such a pity and i'm sure if you continue this story it'll get more reviews than sugar rush!lol maybe i'm just partial to this story but i love this story! okay so i've said...i'm babbling now, so i'll stop...


~your now faithful reader
alineofprose chapter 14 . 1/26/2006
This is absolutely brilliant stuff. Falling in love after you've married and all that. Gods, you're a genius. It makes my heart all warm and fluffy just at the thought of it.
Countrygurl chapter 1 . 11/5/2005
Hi. I was wondering if you were ever going to update With You. I really like that story and would like to see what happens or if that is the end of the sotry. Thank you
Ashgyrl chapter 14 . 10/8/2005
This story was beyond beautiful.I hope you never stop writting and I hope to read more enchanting and mysterious stories from you.

Ana101 chapter 14 . 8/25/2005
Ok, I read this story awhile ago and when I got to the end, I cried for now I read it again and cried, I looked at your profile and saw not only a sequel, but a TRILOGY! Wow, I'm smart:)
Scribbling Death chapter 14 . 8/21/2005
no epilogue?
Jenn chapter 12 . 7/27/2005
That whole moon explanation at the end of ch. 12 isn't exactly correct. While it is true that light has different wavelengths, that is not entirely the explanation for the "orange moon" thing. In actuality the moon does not give off any light whatsoever. At certain times of the day, specifically sunrise and sunset, the moon appears orange because of the sun's rays reflecting off of it back towards the Earth at specific angles (hence the whole wavelength thing). And that is the full reason.
anonymous chapter 14 . 6/30/2005
this story is wonderful!
katieee chapter 14 . 6/18/2005
Interesting chapter. Interesting story. Update soon
Katsiebee chapter 14 . 4/22/2005
Wow. That was really good. Thanks for writing!
nedi chapter 14 . 4/22/2005
it's a baby! how wonderful for them. ) can't wait to see the next chapter.

becca chapter 14 . 4/15/2005
i really like this chapter! great job! keep going .!
Limegreenqueen chapter 14 . 4/9/2005
oh my that was great. they came such a long way. please start a new story. also if you check your speeling you should send this somewhere for publishing . its real;ly good at least let them look over it. i want a chapter dedicated to me. if i review for your next story you have to promise to dedicated one to me and definitely tell me if your story is publishedthanks 4 writing keep up the good worklove karla
Unangelichalo chapter 14 . 4/8/2005
Oh, Claves, that was so cute!

I loved it!


I'd love you forever if you did one.


Love Kat.
Oh la la chapter 14 . 4/8/2005
no! Tell me that "End of With You" doesn't eally mean what i want it to mean! it can't be over! please write an epilouge or something! *begs on hands and knees on the ground* like when she's giving birth or something. Please don't end it so aburptly! at least a sappy happy ending one. Not like that
310 | « Prev Page 1 .. 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 19 .. Last Next »