Greetings Scraper,Ohh! I like this story. Little Johnny: poor kid. Mrs. Brown: idiot woman. Mr. Smith: Tries to help but just can't. Evil truck driver: typical, very typical. Gabriel: cool angel. In short, very amusing, just shows the different kinds of people in this world. But in all honesty, I think humans are weak and easily corrupted. Especially, where we come from, my friend. I like the concept. Love the story. Signed K. the U.G. AKA Wingdog of the World

Not much original here, and quite flawed at the end-if he can see into the future, and tell what is going to happen to people, then why does have to keep being reborn as human to study and try to understand them?

Maybe Johnny should have just stayed home.

WOW i love stories like this...GALING! rock on!

A great piece of writing. You have a talent implying more than said.

I like the various insights into human nature, and Gabriel's POV in the end added a supernatural flavor.

Keep up the good work!

wow, very good

Yes, I understand this.

Mas magaling pala ang play of words mo sa Ingles. Kumpara dun sa sanaysay mo, astig ang descriptions sa mga iniisip ni Gabriel (tama ba?).

Sa'ng bansa ka ba nakatira? Tanong lang ha. Kasi, dito, nakasuhan ng 'speeding, piracy at murder' yung driver. Andami naman. Ang alam ko kasi, hindi patong-patong ang pagbibigay ng kaso. Halimbawa, pwede na lang na Reckless Imprudence leading to homicide yung kaso (kasi nga mabilis yung takbo tapos nakasagasa, di pinanagutan)-di ako sigurado ah! Check mo rin. O kaya accessory to the crime...kasi kasabwat siya sa piracy...pero di rin ako sigurado dyan...kasi dito sa PInas, di ako sigurado kung napasa na sa Senado yung Anti-Piracy Law...kung andito ka sa Pilipinas...

Yun lang...research ka nang mas maayos sa susunod ha...baka may makabasa na lawyer dito, masesermonan ka tungkol sa batas...

hey scraper! that was really nice.. i understood it, kinda. nice words of description as well.. _