Reviews for Knocking at Your door
Wing Chant chapter 1 . 1/29/2005
Wow, that was utterly amazing. It really tests the person your talking abouts undying love for you. lol. I wonder though...if I spilled moldy milk on MY boyfriend, slapped him on the face for no reason, threw a bucket of boiling water on his head, stabbed him with a fork up his ass, and lit his body with oil...and after all that, would he even friggin open the door a jar? 0 it's a mystery! Anyhoo, I also wanna comment on the format of this poem, because it so unique and much different then all the other poems out there. Rock on!
songofthesiren chapter 1 . 1/27/2005
wow...speechless this is so awsome it reminds me of a song but i don't know what it is like something i'd hear in my dreams. keep it uplove is all you need
FushigiNeko chapter 1 . 1/27/2005
This is very powerful, and wonderful. I can relate to this quite well... I must say again, this is very wonderful.
dustytiger chapter 1 . 1/27/2005
that's an amazing piece, i get the feeling it is a song, it flows very well, and the repition is just enough to keep it powerful, i think a lot of people will be able to relate to this