Reviews for Goodbye World
PuzzledThinker chapter 1 . 4/22/2005
Aw :(... Boo i dont wanna be sad today. Well anyways I will get over it. Good poem
Melissa Lea Night chapter 1 . 3/7/2005
absolutely beautiful, i'm very impressed by this piece, i can't wait to read more of your stuff.
Werewolf Nighteyes chapter 1 . 3/3/2005
Sad. But the words you use here are beautiful. Good job!
Stormie Greye chapter 1 . 2/17/2005
Wow, you certainly have a way with descriptions. Very beautifully written.
x0sweetpea160x chapter 1 . 1/29/2005
I really like the way this is written. Its beautiful. In some odd way, i relate.
Blooming Darkness chapter 1 . 1/29/2005
oh, this is really nice. i love this poem. i've written some myself, but none are as descriptive as this. could you maybe read some and tell me what you think? it would mean a lot to me...

-blooming darkness
Dr. Anonymous chapter 1 . 1/29/2005
Great poem. I love the rythym and emotion. Keep them coming. Read and review some of mine if you get the chance.
Laura Barton chapter 1 . 1/28/2005
Just one question: is it supposed to rhyme? I ask this because in a few parts it did, while in the majority it didn't. Still good all the same -
Silentwriter9 chapter 1 . 1/27/2005
wow. very nice poem, sad but good. I liked the three lines: "While the snow falls around/Like stars from an endless open wound/With white blood trickling"

great imagery (or however you spell that damn word lol)


Thank you for your reviews... you spoil me so! lol D