Reviews for Thorn Garden Nightmares
myno chapter 1 . 3/4/2005
I'll keep

pressing this thorn

with my thumb to my skin

bleeding ever so beautifully

deep.

That's amazing... So very well written, i am at a loss for words. Constructive criticism? But what to criticize?
Galadh Niniel chapter 1 . 2/10/2005
Haunting. I can relate in a way ... perhaps that's why this poem has affected me so deeply. "I just can't help it,

you're so beautiful.

If you forgive me for my sins

I promise,

I'll keep

pressing this thorn

with my thumb to my skin

bleeding ever so beautifully

deep." ... What can i say? *sigh*