|Reviews for Come on baby|
| aquamoon222 chapter 1 . 2/22/2005
That is so intense. Very heart felt! Wow! That's good. Short, but it says alot.
I was wondering if maybe you'd R&R a new poem of mine called All I ever wanted. I wanna know what ya think! Thanks:)
| AllyCred chapter 1 . 1/29/2005
this is very good...i really like it...you're kinda saying come and just try to hurt me coz, what ur doing at the minute just ain't causing enough pain...i love it...kinda saying no matter what you do, you can't hurt me...i know how that is...but nicely done...very well written...definately a fav. lots of love ~AllyCred~
| Aslan Israel chapter 1 . 1/29/2005
Interesting concept. but I like it.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/28/2005
interesting.. its very tempting and powerful
| mistressKC chapter 1 . 1/28/2005
yeah - those lines are there to seperate the stanzas. fictionpress before showed the spaces in between but now they don't so it's a big clump of words. I hope it didn't look horrible
btw: nice poem!