|Reviews for Not So Chocolate Baby|
| Jezsh chapter 1 . 12/11/2005
I love poems you can 'taste'. Fantastic imagery, mysterious, sexy :)
| Artemises Linux chapter 1 . 9/2/2005
This is good _ The descriptions are intresting. Keep it up.
| HailToTheTheives chapter 1 . 2/18/2005
yet another poem were i love the rhyming sceme! :)
| Quirin chapter 1 . 2/5/2005
i really like this. your word choice is perfect, and it flows well. nice work.
| Crazy Biene chapter 1 . 2/5/2005
Wow! You are really an awesome poet,and I am not lying! I have read so many poems, but urs seem to relate to numerous things. THis is one of the best poem I have come across eversince I thought of fp! Awesome!
| Cherry Jones chapter 1 . 1/29/2005
nice I really liked it gave alot of imagrythank you for reviewing my workand you keep up the great work
| AllyCred chapter 1 . 1/29/2005
nice...very inventive...i love the comparison you made between chocolate...very well written...i love it. lots of love ~AllyCred~
| Aslan Israel chapter 1 . 1/29/2005
Love the rerferances to food. They make your poem so much more real, cause we've all tasted this stuff. Great job!
| firemounrain chapter 1 . 1/28/2005
My favorite line: "The coffee tang you leave." decent poetry.
| hollyg20 chapter 1 . 1/28/2005
I liked this a lot. Very nice...hope to see more soon!
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/28/2005
I love the whole food thing.. made me hungry...lol.. nice job
| ConcealedWay chapter 1 . 1/28/2005
This is really good especially the
'So when my love returns
He’ll never suspect the salt in the sugar.'
Going to read everything you wrote now. )
| plastic figurine chapter 1 . 1/28/2005
"He’ll never suspect the salt in the sugar."
Love that line. Thanks for reviewing my stuff :)
| drippingdreams chapter 1 . 1/28/2005
O... deep. I love all the taste references, especiall the line "your candied kiss".. I have a little Magnetic Poetry line on my fridge that's like that, it says "hot candy kiss".