|Reviews for A Man's Will|
| hit chapter 1 . 5/4/2005
That was interesting. Good but at the same time very interesting. Your topics are branching out more than they did last year. tres bon. Me likes muchHit(man)
| Cassie chapter 1 . 2/13/2005
Thats so hot.
| david chapter 1 . 2/12/2005
| Diva chapter 1 . 2/12/2005
Wow... amazingly written, extremely poetic, great use of description. It kept me begging for more. Great, great job. :)
| euphonia chapter 1 . 1/28/2005
I loved it!The absolute best thing about this poem is the spacing, the way you make the reader speed up and slow down just by putting different amounts of words on a line. way you portrayed the idea of lust was exactly how I would imagine it to be, but at the same time entirely different. I always thought of lust as a kind of 'thought', an 'idea', floating through my head. When you put the concept into writing it looked foreign, but as I studied the lines more closely it exactly matched what my 'thought' was, if it was put into words.
Was that confusing? Perhaps. But basically I wanted to tell you what an awsome poem you wrote.