Reviews for Oblivious
absentmindedprofessor chapter 1 . 5/3/2012
Sad but sweet. I really liked the imagery portrayed in this piece, and the dialogue was nice, too.
Kim chapter 1 . 1/29/2005
WOW
keep.breathing chapter 1 . 1/29/2005
I don't know why I like this so much. . . it just draws me in. Stuff like this usually doesn't. I read your other piece too, and it had the same affect. It's something about the words you use I guess. And it is a bit short, but I think that brings something into it. . . I don't know if you did it intentionally, but the "shortness" :) actually works here. I'm adding this to my favorite's list. Keep up the great work! ~Abigail
KittiBear chapter 1 . 1/29/2005
Terribly short. Very nice for something this short though. Could have been great if you made it longer, adding more detail and such.