Reviews for Understanding
FunkyFlower chapter 1 . 5/30/2005
Dear Smackalicious, cool poem. i like the way u keep repeating 'i hope u understand'. the beginning is good but to improve mebbe u should build up a climax by making the middle longer. otherwise, it's gr8! the ending is pretty good when u say 'now i'm dead'. makes it sound final. hope u can review my poems sumtime. good luck and keep writing!