Oh, nice chapter! I'm curious to know who's in the room. You must update soon! I like the way Yukira thinks, that's her name right? LoL. Can't wait to find out where this story is heading to.

You like werewolves! Good story so far. BTW: CHAPTER 3 OF THE OTHERWORLD IS UP!

you have to read stolen. and the next book. and the next book. haha someone has reading to do...and darn its another cliffie. If you don't update...I'll...I'll... do something. I love this story! cant wait to find out who's in the room (a hot guy?*hopeful look*) and WHAT THE HECK IS GOING ON!and have really long chappies if ur gonna take forever to update...~birdytamel~

*jumps up and down*cliffie! cliffie! just my luck the next chappie's posted! Thanx so much for reviewing becausea) i love reviews and b) I found this story! *grins*on to the next chappie!~birdytamel~

Considering that i have only read this far, i think you should for sure keep up the writting. This was freakin awesome!

One thing we have in common is our love of wolves ).

This is interesting - I'm guessing the wolf trying to escape has just recently been bitten? Anyway, nice job - I'm looking forward to more.

Wow...amazing, suspenseful first chapter..I really liked it..the poor main character :( I've always loved werewolf stories and this one sounds very promising so far :D This chapter left alot of questions and ended with a great cliffhanger...and ouch...a painful one at that *cringes* keep writing!

Hi! Thank you so much for the review and now. . . the amazing, wonderful (slightly strange because of the reviewer) review!

Can human ears twitch? Sorry. . . You said she hadn't changed yet, so if she's still human does she still have the wolf ability to twitch her ears. I know animals can, but I didn't think humans could. I guess it's possible. . .

Stranger things have happened (such as me becoming a writer, even WITH my short attention span!)

Can't wait to read the next chapter, it was well written, and I am werewolf obsessed. Keep writing, this is great.

Ooh. My new oh so impressive motto is now 'if you review, I review' *grins evilly* sometimes.

-Arrow's Flight-

(yes, some of us are just to lazy to logg in. deal with it. lol) this was fun! lol. sorta hyper, beware. terrific descriptions, but in the next chapter will you sort of explain more?

anyway keep it up!

sincerly kahe

Very nice chapter and I love the way the protagonist thinks, her thoughts are much more realistic than most stories I've read. Really loved it. I wonder who else is in that room. Well, anyways, hope you update

wow...this is amazing...its so descriptive, and so eloquent. I am just amazed... wow.

a good second chapter. It leaves me with a few qestions thoe, but I think that in the next few chapters they will be exsplained. Keep it up, can't wait to read more,

Kerry~

is the button purple for you? cause for me it's grey...er... anyway...

this would be great as a story with more chapters, bacause you could explain more. then again it would also be terrific as it is, becase it leaves you wondering yet there is enough to be a short story.

keep on writing!

-kashe

Thankies for review! - (Makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside... okay, maybe not "fuzzy," but you get the point.) O_o *twitch* Yes, "Altered" will be updated... eventually... my writing (I will no longer call it "Creative" writing) teacher is whipping out the evil PROMPT. Dammit.

I luff werewolves... and I like how different people have different imaginings of them. I liked this... some techinical errors (commas missing, wrong "threw" somewhere in the beginning, "their" instead of "they're" at the end here) but overall very well written and intriguing. Only thing nitpicking at me (o_O *twitch twitch*) is: are the other werewolves being meanies and chasing main character, or making fun because he's weaker, or playing around? My brain hurts from strain... O_o *twitch* Sorry.

But still, I luff the story... you could almost get away with leaving it a one-shot. Also if you are into fantasy fiction, please (PLEASE!) read "The Dragon's Embrace" or "Avatar" on my account and say what you think... if you likes than review! _ Periodically check in on "Altered" and enjoy!

*~Taisa the Werecat~*

This is very good, and thanks for the review you gave me. There is one sentence I was wondering about, should it be- They held too much intelligence?