I am BACK! Aren't you excited? No wait, why are you running away?

I daresay,you make me want to write werewolf related stuff. Although you would put me to shame, I suspect. This is so...wolfish, if you excuse the pun. I found only one or two very minor spelling errors, but you find those in all writing, even published things, so it's not a big deal.

This piece really showcased your talent. I want to see more! More I tell you!

*grins happily* I like were-animals too. Can't be enough of them to go around, neh?

This was very engaging, and I like your style. I would like to see a prologue or flashback of how this guy turned (or was he born werewolf?). I read your profile and noticed we have a lot in common :) I like basically everything you do, and we're the same age, rofl. Anyway, I'd like to see an update to this.

Dear Shadows,

This is an incredibly strong start for something you just cranked out! Aside from some ambiguous descriptions that make pieces of the story weak (could it have been BOTH fear and exhaustion that made her heart beat so? was her snarl beastlike in the silence or not?), overall this moves quickly. The tempo matched the plot completely! You should definitely pursue this further.

On a related note, I was reading your profile and I saw you like Laurell K as well! Rock on. I got some books signed by her a couple months back. I still can hardly believe I was standing before one of the most excellent female writers ever...

Keep writing! I'm taking my stuff off of here and moving to another OWW ( .com) that's like FP but way better. I'll keep you on my list so I can keep reviewing your stuff though. You absolutely are the next Laurell K ;)

Sincerely,C.3.3

Eh, Midnight Predator here, I'm too lazy to log in. Awesome story, lots of description, a little stuck as far as a plot, I don't see how you can continue it if you killed him off, but if you find a way, you should defintely continue this.

happy hunting, ~MIdnight Predator~

oow, werewolves my fav. I love the begaining so far. I can't wait to read more. This reminds me of a book I have read before, have you ever hear of Bitten by Kelly Armstrong by any chance?

This was a great beginning for a story. I really enjoyed your use of descriptions. You must write more! It's really good! Suspenseful ending...I wanna know what happens next. Must...know. XD! I hope you continue with this story. Awesome job.

I think it's good for a start, even if you don't have the plot line figured out completely _ I love the fact that the wolves were toying with the protagonist. Anyways, it was good, though I think I already said that _