Gosh, this was so heartbreaking and so pretty! Such beautiful imagery. I loved it. :3

when i read this i see the crazy matrix-like graphics that would go with the tear drop falling, lol.

"each crystal heart falls to the floor." Such a pretty and original way to describe tears! Wonderful, it's really wonderful.

I love this so awesome and amazing! Great job!

Aw. I love it! Its beautiful!

Awsomeness! I love it, simple, short and beautiful, yet so deep, and smart..Great writing, keep it up!Much love, Meme

Most people who write about crying or tears go into an angsty moment *Like me sadly* But I love how you based the poem on the actual tears and not just the saddened moment. Very very smart adnd brilliant!

one of your best... beautiful.

Nice work. It shows this death and strong passion. I really like the way you put the pd/dot between every two lines. It puts more imaginations into this. Clearly written by a good poet.

aww...this is really good...i love this...keep it up!

This is so absolutely beautiful. You say so much by leaving so much unsaid, if that makes sense. I love the images that each tear is a part of oneself, a crystal heart, and a drop of soul's blood; that's so true. And they fall to the floor. The love and pain, the part of oneself that is put into them, go unseen, unheeded, uncared for. Or at least that's how the speaker feels. Powerful message. I sometimes feel like that as well. This poem is going on my favourites.

I'M AT SCHOOL AND THAT WAS AWESOME! D Beautiful imagery, good job!

so simple and yet so full of deep meaning.

That is so beautiful...i love it.

beautiful piece. nice imagery, and i like the rhythm in this piece... it give the poem a nice flow to it and a good sense of unity. nicely done.