Reviews for tears
another lullaby chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
Gosh, this was so heartbreaking and so pretty! Such beautiful imagery. I loved it. :3
SeaVoi chapter 1 . 7/23/2006
when i read this i see the crazy matrix-like graphics that would go with the tear drop falling, lol.
kit feral chapter 1 . 11/13/2005
"each crystal heart falls to the floor." Such a pretty and original way to describe tears! Wonderful, it's really wonderful.
HauntedMisery chapter 1 . 6/9/2005
I love this so awesome and amazing! Great job!
antidote chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
Aw. I love it! Its beautiful!
Moosher chapter 1 . 5/23/2005
Awsomeness! I love it, simple, short and beautiful, yet so deep, and smart..Great writing, keep it up!Much love, Meme
Out-Of-Reality chapter 1 . 4/19/2005
Most people who write about crying or tears go into an angsty moment *Like me sadly* But I love how you based the poem on the actual tears and not just the saddened moment. Very very smart adnd brilliant!
myno chapter 1 . 3/4/2005
one of your best... beautiful.
under estimated artistsoul chapter 1 . 2/21/2005
Nice work. It shows this death and strong passion. I really like the way you put the pd/dot between every two lines. It puts more imaginations into this. Clearly written by a good poet.
dancingintherain chapter 1 . 2/17/2005
aww...this is really good...i love this...keep it up!
Galadh Niniel chapter 1 . 2/16/2005
This is so absolutely beautiful. You say so much by leaving so much unsaid, if that makes sense. I love the images that each tear is a part of oneself, a crystal heart, and a drop of soul's blood; that's so true. And they fall to the floor. The love and pain, the part of oneself that is put into them, go unseen, unheeded, uncared for. Or at least that's how the speaker feels. Powerful message. I sometimes feel like that as well. This poem is going on my favourites.
KonekOniko chapter 1 . 2/10/2005
I'M AT SCHOOL AND THAT WAS AWESOME! D Beautiful imagery, good job!
Earthbound Angel 49 chapter 1 . 2/7/2005
so simple and yet so full of deep meaning.
this is my love for you chapter 1 . 1/30/2005
That is so beautiful...i love it.
obsidian katana chapter 1 . 1/30/2005
beautiful piece. nice imagery, and i like the rhythm in this piece... it give the poem a nice flow to it and a good sense of unity. nicely done.
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