Reviews for Desires
bnnyofdarkness chapter 1 . 2/19/2005
I love this poem. It really is a gift to give someone, but sadly it was in lust. Thank you for reviewing my poem. Keep writing

-Karen
Ninja Commander chapter 1 . 2/2/2005
I liked the use of the terms 'give' and 'accept'. Nicely written.
Lady DreamWriter chapter 1 . 2/2/2005
wow wow and wow, this is now a favorite of mine.
secondall chapter 1 . 1/30/2005
Very nice description, without actually saying the words at all.

grazie for the review... "interesting." real descriptive and helpful, there. lol.
Princess Alice chapter 1 . 1/30/2005
Wow, deep. And a Vanessa Carlton reference to boot! I can relate, unfortunately, but you captured the situation perfectly.
D L Dzioba chapter 1 . 1/30/2005
Wow, That really, Actually i'm not sure what i is, I birngs in me some emotions that I cannot name. Powerful. I really like it.