Reviews for Serenity
wishingdreamingwaiting chapter 1 . 5/22/2005 that was actually ... beautiful. please don't be offended by that... i just don't normally find poems beautiful. great work!
The Failed Poet chapter 1 . 5/21/2005
That is beautiful. I love how you repeated the first stanza at the end. And it's truly beautiful. It rained today very hard and the sky was a strange golden color reminiscent of the apocalypse. Seeing this poem reminded me of the rain.
sheerWonder chapter 1 . 4/8/2005
BRAVO! this is exquisite! the lines you use are beautiful individualy, but flow together to form something wonderful!
suzieque2 chapter 1 . 2/6/2005
Ahh... refreshing
WarriorHeart chapter 1 . 1/30/2005
really cool. haven't seen anything like this before, in topic or writing. keep it up!
Panchromatic chapter 1 . 1/30/2005
very pretty. i like this. it's simple and not too overblown. love the last line. i always feel like its not a poem if it doesn't have a good last line