Reviews for Confidant, Sweetheart? |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Update soon? I like the chemistry Derilyn and Alex have. |
![]() ![]() ![]() HAHAHA! Having them pretend to sleep together was hilarious! And creative. Interesting , please, please continue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm really liking this story so far. I can't wait to see how Alex and Darilyn's relationship develops. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's only three chapters, but i alreay love your story ] it's hard to find a story that's written very well and where the actions of the characters are somewhat realistic. Your story has so much potential ] anyway, update soon! D Alex's prank was awesome. i wish i could pull off a prank on someone, but i always end up laughing or smiling and giving it all away. it's just so hard NOT to laugh |
![]() ![]() ![]() cute. I love playing pranks. I love Alex already! |
![]() ![]() Very promising start! This seems to be quite dialogue based, but it works pretty well. Can't wait to see where you take it. Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey, great story! need more, NEED more! UPDATE soon, ill be waiting!love, trin |
![]() ![]() Please tell me you will continue this. It's a great start and I can't wait to see where you go from here. Love the characters! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You should finish this story. I like Alex from your Tina/CJ story. Please write more soon, AA |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update this story! It sounds like it has a lot of potential! There's not much else I can say about it just now since this only the opening chapter, but you've set it up quite nicely. |
![]() ![]() Ah, a new story -great, but what about finishing Connections (before you rewrite it!)? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like your new story! I like how the two are friends! Can't wait for more! Please update soon!~adders~ |
![]() ![]() I like it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is kind of a nice change from the usual fanfic fare. Yeah, I agree with MuseWorks that the dialogue really flows nicely. IMHO, though, this was sort of a fast intro. It could just be me, anyways. _ It follows your usual writing style, I guess: straight-forward and all. But then, this is the first chapter... I can't promise that I can review again real soon. At least, I'm glad one of us is still writing. P D |
![]() ![]() ![]() thi story rocks! Wher r u going to add Connections...I LOVE AL YOUR STORIES as u can probably tell by now...u SHUD be getting tons of reviews. Really I'm serious! |