Simple but effective. Keep writing.

I love how short you kept it.. if you made it any longer it would totally kill it. I also just love it because I can totally relate.. I think everyone can, which gives it a lot of power.

That's like what happened to me this summer. I spent a week with these people and in the end they only realized I was there because of my generosity to clean their dishes up for them and the fact that I bought some homemade cookies with me.

Though this poem is short it has the ability to display many anecdotes. Keep it up. This poem is amazing.

That was short, but weighed a lot...

I LOVE this. Yeah, it reallt does have a "kiss my ass" attitude, I like the defiance.

I have this whole picture in my head. This person had control over your emotions or whatever, and you finally got over him, and then you showed him exactly how bad it hurt. He wants you back, you're gone.

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Intresting, I like that, Its kind of got this "Kiss my ass" attatude about up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.