Reviews for black moth
Isca chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
Wow. The line, "Rot in the foul earth below," put such a great twist to this piece, as if the moth would now flock to it's flame (in Hell)!
Ironic Presence chapter 1 . 11/4/2006
eek. dark and bleak. But still a good poem.

Anyway, good poem. word choice really brings across the meaning very well.
polaroid.sky chapter 1 . 9/10/2006
Just amazing. Very creative, wonderfully written.
lookingwest chapter 1 . 4/24/2006
simple and to the point, i like it.
kit feral chapter 1 . 11/13/2005
"tamper with the seductive flame" Ooh, so dark and erotic. It's just gorgeous.
Ahemait chapter 1 . 2/27/2005
wow, that was really short. but despite of that it was very good. i liked it a lot, greta job
Ivriniel chapter 1 . 2/17/2005
Wow, cool. Again, great choice of words, especially the word "rot" makes the ending very powerful.
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 2/12/2005
ah thanks for your review, awaiting to what u think of me new poem... i cant seem to write anything recently... cept unfinished stuff. finally got a poem out...

i know to review when i can. which i can right now. not much in a reviewing mood tho, not sure why... no other time tho and im sad i fell so far behind too. sucks but meh, happens.

i love your writing though. so nice and raw. greatness!
Crazy Biene chapter 1 . 2/6/2005
Oh col. Did you get inspired while looking at the ceiling? LOl. gr8 job.
Rebecca Kelsey chapter 1 . 2/2/2005
wow, totally awesome. *loves*
Dahlia Wolffe chapter 1 . 2/2/2005
Damn- you just got straight to it. Lol- pretty good though. please review me sometime!-Yin
obsidian katana chapter 1 . 2/1/2005
nice piece. i like your diction and imagery. awesome last line. :) great job.
QueenVixta chapter 1 . 2/1/2005
I love it. The imagery and descriptions are amazing. Well done! Vix
arcane devices chapter 1 . 2/1/2005
short, but it's powerful. great job.-ADD
NeuroticGothicLolitaDeathDolly chapter 1 . 2/1/2005
Short, but melancholic... I found it almost cute.
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