Reviews for Alone
boy that you loved chapter 1 . 2/24/2005
i found it quite cynical, but pertinent to every new generation.

good poem

'aptmyn, aptmyd, aptmyae, batditwwshfh'
mormonboy chapter 1 . 2/2/2005
This poem is me. Once again another great poem. Continue and keep it up. Thanks for reviewing my poem and I enjoy yours. Ur a great writer.
Caorann fridh Bronach chapter 1 . 2/1/2005
Very moving piece. I can relate to it, and I think it speaks a lot of truth. Your repetition makes it more appealing, and the imagery of sitting alone in darkness is very evident. Here's my favorite line: "So here you sit pretending to be braveWhile you fall apart inside"However, I really liked the opening two lines as well. Marvelous job! It's great that you can put so much expression into your work.
Mistress of Eternity chapter 1 . 1/31/2005
Captured it.. perfectly. This is so powerful. *bows down*


TakeMyPhotoOffTheWall chapter 1 . 1/31/2005
Beautiful! This was amazing. -applauds- I loved it! -Kelli
Firefly of the Cosmos chapter 1 . 1/31/2005
very emotional ur a very good writter, keep up the good work

P.S-thanks for ur review
DarkPresence chapter 1 . 1/31/2005
Wow. You have a great way of capturing emotions. I can totally relate.