Reviews for The Darkness In Me
BlackDreamLily chapter 1 . 11/10/2005
whoa... and again, whoa... Somebody had a wee bit too much viaga me thinks- lol. Lovely adjectives!
Jade Silver chapter 1 . 6/10/2005
Makes the imagination work wonders. The single words create a whole new meaning.
lordelfy chapter 1 . 3/28/2005
col...sorry i am never good with reviews )
wantedINheaven chapter 1 . 2/28/2005
Woah, that's definitely different. And no, it definitely did not disappoint! Enrapturing..

Sorry I didn't get to you before this; my server was screwed and wouldn't let me access these pages. All fixed though! Yay!
Kitty-brdg chapter 1 . 2/5/2005
I like this poem. It's just, well I have no words that can describe it. lol.

Maybe for a Title, try using something that has to do with the lips, or go with the darkness idea. Darkness is lovely. lol.

Hope you find a title
aeolyn chapter 1 . 2/2/2005
Nicely done. Never saw the whole vampyre thing coming, but I liked it nonetheless _ Loved your word choice in this. Gave a nice effect on the poem.
dustytiger chapter 1 . 1/31/2005
very nicely written, and the vampyre thing was really outta the blue, very nice touch... suggestion for a title simply "love?"
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 1/31/2005
Great use of detail and imagry, I really like it, its unique and up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.