Reviews for Take It All Away
dancingintherain chapter 1 . 2/18/2005
aw...this is so sad, wow he was mean! i would kick his ass to the moon if i could for you! great poem, by the way, the emotion flows on each line...)

thanks for adding me to your fav authors list! it made my day!

keep it up! hellokittychic
Amethyst Eyed Cynical One chapter 1 . 2/3/2005
is really good. i especially like the line, 'You chopped my heartstrings,' that really got me. overall its a great poem. boys are emotionless craps anyway.
Incandescent Dreamer chapter 1 . 1/31/2005
aw i know guys can suck!but on a happier note i really liked the poem!
FallBreeze chapter 1 . 1/31/2005
I really like this- I kind of interpretted it as something I felt was similar to what you're writing about and happened to me. And reading this made me re-live that experience. You did really well with sensory stuff-great stuff. That decay of a relationship, and false hope and stuff..
Wing Chant chapter 1 . 1/31/2005
0 How evil! Having a person laugh at your poems. :'( That's depressing! I admired the anger in this poem. ;D Good job! You show him who's boss! Poems will conquer! :D
Zodiacreborn chapter 1 . 1/31/2005
Poetry is deeper than those who don't write it generally poem.

-Zodiac