Reviews for Take It All Away
dancingintherain chapter 1 . 2/18/2005
aw...this is so sad, wow he was mean! i would kick his ass to the moon if i could for you! great poem, by the way, the emotion flows on each line...)

thanks for adding me to your fav authors list! it made my day!

keep it up! ~hellokittychic~
Amethyst Eyed Cynical One chapter 1 . 2/3/2005
is really good. i especially like the line, 'You chopped my heartstrings,' that really got me. overall its a great poem. boys are emotionless craps anyway.
Incandescent Dreamer chapter 1 . 1/31/2005
aw i know guys can suck!but on a happier note i really liked the poem!
FallBreeze chapter 1 . 1/31/2005
I really like this- I kind of interpretted it as something I felt was similar to what you're writing about and happened to me. And reading this made me re-live that experience. You did really well with sensory stuff-great stuff. That decay of a relationship, and false hope and stuff..
Wing Chant chapter 1 . 1/31/2005
0 How evil! Having a person laugh at your poems. :'( That's depressing! I admired the anger in this poem. ;D Good job! You show him who's boss! Poems will conquer! :D
Zodiacreborn chapter 1 . 1/31/2005
Poetry is deeper than those who don't write it generally poem.