Reviews for Untitled
RootbeerFloat chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
Wow, I think this peice of poetry really spoke to my heart. You're right, it can be interpreted in many ways, but if I were to interpret it in my own way to make it relate to me (Ah the beauty of poetry and interpretation) then I realy enjoyed this and think that this one should be published (even though you've been published before, you sly girl. wink wink.)
Kiran S chapter 1 . 2/1/2005
wow thats the same way i feel sumtimes. strong on the outside, weak on the inside. very well written!

-kiran

ps. thnx for the review
123456789gone chapter 1 . 1/31/2005
I really rather like this. The way that the poem has no particular form paticularly appeals to me as this something that I always set out to acheive and never do. It helps do give the impression of a flow of ideas and feelings.

The emotions are very well articulated, but also done very simply. This has the wonderful effect of portraying what is a fairly deep set of emotions.

The punctuation is lacking through most of this and could probably do with looking at. Apart from this, really good stuff!
The System Mother chapter 1 . 1/31/2005
Nice write. Good read. Heh.
The Opposite chapter 1 . 1/31/2005
that is a good one for many situations in life. well written.