Reviews for Little Red Pills
monkey chapter 1 . 1/21/2006
exactly... i feel this way a lot too. i love the metaphor.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/22/2005
amazing metahpor and so true
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 2/7/2005
Sadly I can't find the metaphor. :( OH! It's not your fault. I'm just being stupid is all. _ I will most likely figure it out sometime in June. :P Kidding!

I really liked it though. Just had that angsty feel to it that didn't leave me feel it was over done. You wrote this extremely well and I love the format you chose. Brillant poem!

!~* Noelle *~!
SumiFritzN chapter 1 . 1/31/2005
I'm somewhat confused. I know that you don't take medication, and judging by the genre you put this under it's some type of characteristic(?) that you've assumed lately? Or maybe it's just something you've been doing more and more, but it seems like you purposly left it up to the reader to decide what it is. Pure anger? Jealousy? Competitiveness? I'm not sure. Whatever the thing is I guess for me it didn't really matter. It was just something bad, something you feel like you love and need, but hate and need to get rid of, too. Which is something everyone can relate to in some way. (Wow this is long.) As always, great writing!~Nikki~