Reviews for Going Down? |
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![]() ![]() I like it! It's refreshing that the main character is the rich kid, instead of it always being the guy.I like her name too, it's writing!) |
![]() ![]() ![]() keep going! i luv the way shes so self-centered! its so much more believable. nice job |
![]() ![]() That's so cute, so far. I love how it's written, and I also love Adam. Can you give him more of an appearance description? That would be great. Email me when the next chapter is up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is very cute, you must continue this. I like Tea already, but I didn't know why she was already against Adam just because he was stuck with her in an elevator. The last line was really awesome and humorous. Well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heeheehee...another great chapter :) I like the last line in particular. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story so far! You're gifted for sure. Your sense of humor is really coming through, especially when you describe the smelly freshmen ;) Awesome job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The main character is a bit vain, non? Ah, je parle francais... Not very well though. In fact, I'm horrible at the language. I find it interesting that the character wishes she would be in that, haha. I love how she loves her purse, and the descriptions. She seems like she could be a real person, just strolling around and feeding her less hot friends to the lions [or hobos]. |
![]() ![]() ![]() your story is really good! I hope u continue writting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahaha x) Loved the conversation with the hobo. Funny. Keep writing, please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, this Marley chick is kind of a bitch! Besides the fact that she bought the poor guy lunch, though. But I'm thinking she did that just because A) She's rich and is able to pay for spur of the moment things whenever she wants and B) She was looking for some sort of entertainment. I like bitchy people; they amuse me. Please update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just for future references, A-wall is spelled AWOL. Other than that, it's a good read |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg how shallow can you get! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool story, poor homeless dude :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() *giggles* It's lovely! The ordeal with the homeless guy was priceless - totally hilarious. And I tell you, she does have a pretty good point with never forgetting your purse.. It can be DANGEROUS sometimes. Please continue, I can't wait to see what happens! |
![]() ![]() This is great so far! :) |