Reviews for Battlefield
Chaotic Charisma chapter 1 . 2/18/2005
*think* it's a song? Oy vei. All I'm saying. Anyways! Deja vu. I swear, I reviewed this one before. Because I'm a pain, I'll point out "I haven't forget about you" instead of "forgotten?" I like your line about waiting for a winner to be crowned, but it makes me sort of sad at the same time, you know? Especially when you put that image in the middle of a battlefield. Very interesting/nice/good touch. Aside from all of which, where have you been? I haven't seen you online in forever!
Browneyes91 chapter 1 . 2/3/2005
I think love is a battlefield is in a song... newayz that was a really good poem, i like that a lot. i love how u relate things, i think its called a metaphor or similie ( as u can tell i didnt get a A in language arts)

Katie
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 2/1/2005
::sigh:: i can realte.. nice ending.. its very ambigious
TheLastKiss chapter 1 . 2/1/2005
Exactly what seems to go one within my twisted head, maybe not so uncommon. Great work.

Take Care,Brittney
mysticalfluff chapter 1 . 2/1/2005
Very nice, the end fits well.
shadowz-333 chapter 1 . 2/1/2005
I really like this one... But I said I'll wait... I"M JUST NOT PATIENT!