| Reviews for You've Got Mail |
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  ShiningBanana chapter 4 . 6/11/2005 Cool- I like the different style of writing. It's interesting to read once you get the hang of it. |
 Arialla chapter 4 . 6/11/2005 I love this. It’s so cute. ) ~ Aria |
| Karuli chapter 4 . 6/10/2005 yay! new chap! are always going to be writing in e-mail and IM style? cuz jus wondering |
| nedi chapter 4 . 6/10/2005 lol. ok, so he enjoys talking with himself. xD can't wait until the two meet. i'm enjoying this messaging thing so much. lol. diSasteRAngL |
| bulletproof.cupid chapter 4 . 6/10/2005 It's really good so far. It's an interesting style since you use emails and IMs all the time. Hence the title 'You've Got Mail' I guess. Hey, but it's good... but you'll be missing out on detail. I'm guessing Eve will be decribing her whole tour though and email to Alice and that's how the readers will find out what passed *shrugs* Umm... interesting. Update soon and I can't wait for more. Take care hun, ~Bubblegum |
| bulletproof.cupid chapter 3 . 6/10/2005 HAHA! The endings for every chapter are so freaking hilarious... Hanna, boy that girl's got no sense! I love the satire in this ((damn the english teacher for telling me the meaning of this freaking literary device)). On to the next chapter, adios! |
| Renzie chapter 3 . 6/9/2005 lmao xD I cracked up at the last part in this chapter. Very entertaining. Though I wished there was some easier way to see when the senders change. Like from the girls to the guys. Anyways, great job! |
| cherise chapter 4 . 6/9/2005 Oh Gosh! Alex is doing this to spite Maggie isn't he? Lol, can't wait for the update! |
| lilsakura chapter 4 . 6/9/2005 good! the format fits the story, but is the whole thing gonna be em il form? good luck, that could get tough! |
| TaurusGirl7 chapter 4 . 6/9/2005 omg i just love how he talks to himself... but are you ever going to actually write it like a story... instead of all the emails..? because it s alittle hard to get into the story...anyway, update soon! |
| lostinscotland chapter 4 . 6/9/2005 soo...i have actually been reading this since you started posting it, but...yeah. the style's kinda odd, as i'm sure you're aware. and it has a cool effect, though slightly confusing. which is why i'm extremely grateful that you added the names. incidentally, just how agonizing is it typing this thing up? i would go INSANE. all them emails and im's and whatnot... anyways, all that to say, it's a cool story, cool premise, seems like it'll be fun, but i was being a total grammar nazi (actually...something else, but i can't think of a good description) and not reviewing, even though i do the same thing online. well, the not capitalizing thing. i do tend to punctuate and spell out full words. as i do in my reviews, so you will know. bad spelling aggravates me. so maybe i was being a spelling nazi and not reviewing. whatever. no one really cares anyway. SO! nice work. i likes. and way to have all your updates planned out...i'm impressed at how you have the dates that you're going to update...i'd never be able to do that. i just kinda...update. but i'll give it a try- targeting innocents will be updated...tonight! ...i hope. going away to write. buh-bye! |
| Crazy Wynona chapter 4 . 6/9/2005 Ack! You updated! I'm ecstatic! D |
| jennycraig10 chapter 4 . 6/9/2005 haven't had an update in forever! I love it, please update soon and don't keep me waiting! |
| katieee chapter 4 . 6/9/2005 interesting |
| les petits bateaux chapter 3 . 6/7/2005 Dude...what happened?I'm totally psyched about this piece...great one!:) ~~Trinity |